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Post by solride on May 23, 2011 19:27:57 GMT -5
Walking up and down Diagon Ally i start looking for my school supplies, wondering "What shall i get first?" i go to the Cauldron Shop and get a Cauldron, walking out of there i notice Olivanders Wand shop i tell my Father "Father! lets go there!" We walk into the Shop expecantly with a soft tingle of the bell We wait.....
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Post by Lilly on May 23, 2011 20:01:12 GMT -5
This is a really awesome start! But you need 49 words to make the 100 word mark. Since I know hitting 150 can be really difficult, I know I used to struggle with it my self but trust me it gets easier, if you just add 41 words to this post, it can be about what you're thinking, what you're expecting from school anything you want it just has to be 41 more words! I know you can do it!
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